magazine proposal video/ comment and improvements

comments 

• The name Hip Hop Latest is too long won't be able to write the full name on the front of the magazine.
• The age is too high 
• The price of the magazine is too high 
• £4.50 is a good price for the magazine 

Improvements from the comments 

• I had an option for the name to choose from Hip Hop Latest or Energy. I went with Energy because i was told the name was too long to put on the front of the magazine.
• I did not change the age group as i believe that the age group i choose is good for the hip hop magazine.
• i didnt change the price as it is a good price for the magazine. it is affordable for the age group i have choose as they will all be in work at that age and it will be a monthly magazine not weekly so they wouldn't be wasting so much money on my magazine.