A good start to your front cover the layout is good included a lot of the key features such as price, barcode and masthead
The contents page seems to packed up and pressed into a section you also seem to have two different shades of blue. As at first i thought you colour scheme was (based of your front cover) light blue, white and grey (or black) but in your contents page you don't show consistency as you use dark a light blue.
The double page spread as your probably aware doesn't include much so there isnt much feed back to give
The image is links well with a R&B magazine, however you need to go over your spelling on your main cover line and your cover line. - Front cover. Your contents page layout is brilliant, but the colour scheme is quite dull. - contents page: Rema
front cover: you should add more sublines so people understand whats in the magazine. contents page: the font is hard to read. dps: add image and write about your artist
A good start to your front cover the layout is good included a lot of the key features such as price, barcode and masthead
ReplyDeleteThe contents page seems to packed up and pressed into a section you also seem to have two different shades of blue. As at first i thought you colour scheme was (based of your front cover) light blue, white and grey (or black) but in your contents page you don't show consistency as you use dark a light blue.
The double page spread as your probably aware doesn't include much so there isnt much feed back to give
The image is links well with a R&B magazine, however you need to go over your spelling on your main cover line and your cover line. - Front cover. Your contents page layout is brilliant, but the colour scheme is quite dull. - contents page: Rema
ReplyDeletefront cover:
ReplyDeleteyou should add more sublines so people understand whats in the magazine.
contents page:
the font is hard to read.
dps:
add image and write about your artist