work in progress dps

Double page spread

this is my dps. i still need to add the text. and change the layout around.

draft

work in progress

Front page
 This is the layout of my front cover. i need to improve this by adding my pictures and more covelines. i will put in the image when i take my picturs.

Contents page
this is the layout that i have choosen for my contents page. i have choose to do it like this so people can see where to find all the information. i will add my pictures of my model to the page and the information that will be on each page of the magazine.

flat plan for music magazine

call sheet

work in progress

in the center top of the front cover i will have the name of the magazine which is Energy. i will have a close up image on the front cover of my model. around the front of the magazine i will have text of what will be in my music magazine.

magazine proposal video/ comment and improvements

comments 

• The name Hip Hop Latest is too long won't be able to write the full name on the front of the magazine.
• The age is too high 
• The price of the magazine is too high 
• £4.50 is a good price for the magazine 

Improvements from the comments 

• I had an option for the name to choose from Hip Hop Latest or Energy. I went with Energy because i was told the name was too long to put on the front of the magazine.
• I did not change the age group as i believe that the age group i choose is good for the hip hop magazine.
• i didnt change the price as it is a good price for the magazine. it is affordable for the age group i have choose as they will all be in work at that age and it will be a monthly magazine not weekly so they wouldn't be wasting so much money on my magazine. 

Magazine proposal