Wednesday, 12 October 2016

leyton times





2 comments:

  1. Your magazine front cover has the correct format/layouts. It is missing some more text to make the magazine look a bit more attractive and exciting and the masthead should be a bit bigger to look attractive. The contents page also has the correct format and ideas behind it but is missing some more text so it does not looks so empty. :)

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  2. Could have a more detailed analysis in the contents page of the magazine as a whole. Good use of a smiley/clean and studious person on the front cover. The front cover could have more features shown that will appear in the magazine. There is a lot of blank space that needs to be filled in.

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